Please click on each link above to read an explanation and sample assignments illustrative of the W-Criteria.
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Early in the semester students do short writing assignments during tutorials to help them determine whether they can explain concepts introduced in the lectures. Take 7-10 minutes to explain the significance and implications of identifying a country's human development index and also explain what is meant by "relative deprivation". Write quickly with the purpose of explaining as fully as you can but without trying to construct an essay or formal paper – you just want to set out some ideas to show what you understand at this point. Your writing will not be graded and no one will criticize your grammar, etc., but you will be exchanging assignments with a neighbour to determine the ideas about which you agree and disagree. Because you will not have time to write down everything, this exchange also provides an opportunity to get some more ideas. Together you might arrive at most of what needs to be said! Writing in the Forms Typical of the Discipline Assignment: Policy Brief -- AirCare for British Columbia? Your task is to prepare a policy brief of approximately 3 pages (approximately 1250 words), using the AirCare benefit-cost study. A policy brief is the means by which economists make recommendations to government on what action to take in particular situations. The policy brief should be for the Minister of the Environment for British Columbia and indicate whether or not the AirCare program should be continued for Greater Vancouver. You will need to complete the study by computing the present value of the net benefits of AirCare from the data provided in the study. You might also want to compare your result to the present value of net benefits from no policy, or operating AirCare differently (e.g., less frequent testing). If there is no AirCare, it is still possible to have improvements in air quality from the normal turnover of vehicles (people replacing their old vehicles with new ones that produce less pollution per kilometre traveled). Your policy brief should be clear and concise, following the guidelines covered in tutorials. Data and analysis should be incorporated where appropriate. |
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Analysis of Features and Goals to Develop Strategies for Writing in a Discipline 1. Critiques of Scholarly Papers In the final assignment, you will need to read original research and write a critique of that research. The following process illustrates a way in which you might approach this task: Using guidelines, you have read (a) a scholarly research report on orangutans: Xu and Arnason, The Mitochondrial DNA Molecule of Sumatran Orangutan and a Molecular Proposal for Two (Bornean and Sumatran) Species of Orangutan and (b) a critique of that research, posted in a professional journal: Muir et al., Is There Sufficient Evidence to Elevate the Orangutan of Borneo and Sumatra to Separate Species? In class, we will review the critique through the questions below to examine the structures and modes of reasoning. You will then apply these strategies in writing a similar paper on a topic of your choice. Reading with a view to critique:
2. Essay Openings Good openings in English essays include:
Here are two samples from first-year English essays: Sample 1: Topic: In some works of literature, a character who is a significant presence appears briefly or does not appear at all. Write an essay in which you show how such a character functions in the work. You may wish to discuss how the character affects action, theme, or the development of other characters. Opening of student’s essay: In her passionate novel Obasan, author Joy Kogawa introduces a silent character who has enormous influence on other characters in the story and on the story itself. [essential information] The author presents a saga of two Japanese-Canadian families through the eyes of a main protagonist, Naomi. [narrow focus] Her mother’s character appears briefly in the novel, yet has tremendous influence on the Naomi’s development. [textual evidence] The mother’s character becomes a prism throughout which one is able to understand Naomi’s journey in her life. [writer’s position] Mother, the ideal, the loss, the mystery, the silence about her fate, and her rediscovery is a preoccupation of this novel. Moreover, her request to keep her children unaware of her fate affects Naomi’s life as well as the theme and atmosphere of the novel. [method of development] Sample 2: Topic: Develop a topic on relations between the individual and society in Thomas Hardy’s novel, Under the Greenwood Tree (1872). Opening of student’s essay: The need for collective approval from family members, peers, and people within a community is as apparent today as it was in the middle of the nineteenth century. Thomas Hardy’s novel, Under the Greenwood Tree, [essential information] displays this necessity, and through his character, Miss Fancy Day, we can see this desire for social acceptance. [narrow focus] The desire for approval from her father for her actions, and from the community for her actions and appearance, is apparent throughout the novel. [textual evidence] Hardy also shows that even though public acceptance is so important to Fancy, there is also a desire within her to maintain individuality. [writer’s position] Through her courtship with Dick, we can see Fancy’s need to conform to the standards of society while still maintaining a tinge of distinctiveness. [method of development] |
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Working with another student’s draft As you read your partner’s paper, look for the following and describe what you see to the writer, using the example we did in class. When you have finished reading each other’s papers, take 5-7 minutes to write on your draft and pass it in to your TA:
What to look at and comment on as you read: Introduction:
Body:
Conclusion:
Grading Criteria You will be writing a brief based on your own research study. You will need to refer to the study and voice your recommendations in the appropriate ways. In class, we will practice these ways of wording and use the example brief on Thailand’s coral reefs. An “A” range brief will do the following:
The brief is written so that it:
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Assignment 3 – Argument Essay: A Meteorite Did/Did Not Cause the Extinction of the Dinosaurs Purpose: In this assignment you will research and locate journal articles or books (not the Internet) dealing with the Cretaceous-Tertiary Extinction. You will need to demonstrate an awareness of the scientific terminology/vocabulary used in these articles and books, and show that you can summarize other people’s ideas without plagiarizing. After reading the information you have found, you will argue for or against a meteorite causing the extinction of the dinosaurs. There is no right answer to this question. I want to see you choose a side of the argument and back up your choice with evidence from the scientific literature. The library web page that will help you start your search is: http://www.lib.sfu.ca/researchhelp/subjectguides/easc/easc.htm. Assignment Topic: Find information about the events that happened at the Cretaceous-Tertiary boundary. Read the articles and books, summarize their information, and decide whether you think a meteorite did or did not cause the extinction of the dinosaurs. Write your essay explaining your stance on this issue and support your ideas with evidence from the scientific literature. Cite your references correctly. Genre (form of the writing): Literature search presented in the form of an argument essay. Intended Audience: Your instructor or your scientific peers (use scientific language; no flowery, creative writing). Assignment Format: The assignment should adhere to the following requirements:
Grading Sheet for Dinosaur Assignment 3 – Argument Essay Comprehension: Understanding of scientific terms/vocabulary Scientific ideas or concepts are clearly expressed Organization: There is a thesis Supporting evidence is adequately developed Each paragraph contains relevant details Mechanics: Formatting Spelling and punctuation Grammar and usage Handed in all writing References and citations Final Mark – /80 How You Can Improve Future Assignments: Quality Control in Large Classes with Many Markers Training sessions and explicit grading criteria are essential for consistent feedback among teaching assistants, but consistency in comments and grading may remain an issue, especially for a large class with first-time TAs. In response to this potential problem, teaching assistants are required to identify the best and worst papers for each of their tutorials. The instructor reviews the identified papers for appropriateness of comments and for grading anomalies. Where necessary, further training is provided to teaching assistants, comments are revised, and grades are adjusted. |
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on writing-intensive learning, including a searchable database on relevant
articles, please click on the following link from SFU's Centre for
Writing Intensive Learning: http://www.sfu.ca/cwil/library_db/library_db.html |